Perfect!
I love it!
I like the cadence/ So much better.

Anyhoo (notice my spelling now), it’s good enough for the crowd.

Thanks a million! Will give you proper credits of course.

Title is Ai Ai Oh!

I couldn’t understand some of your rhyming patterns. Why did you rhyme the last line of the first verse with the last line of the second verse? Why rhyme “anger” and “stranger” when, by doing some switching, you can rhyme “danger” and “stranger.” I really can’t see “Amish” and “finish” rhyming. Instead of leaving society as you suggested, I took a different route. This may not be your message, but I think it works. Please accept any changes you like and disregard those you don’t.

There’s a world of Ai coming.

You’ll be replaced with ease.

No more work for all you humans

Cuz Ai will move your cheese.

All your years of higher learning

All your dreams of getting rich

Will be gone in just a second.

Ai is such a B____!

Oh anger! Oh danger!

It’s getting stranger!

Where to run? Where to hide?

Where’s the fun when you’ve lost your pride?

Chorus:

Ei, Ei no!

Back to McDonald’s farm we go!

Ei, Ei So

Accept the status quo.

Or Ei, Ei oh,

What a way to go!

Yes, please!

Polish it up as much as you like. I think I’ll share it in my talk.

Let me know if you’d like my critique.

Yeah. Ai isn’t perfect. I admit the cadence was better before I tweaked it but it was repetitious and didn’t make much sense — making it rhyme was the priority.

I like your suggestion.

Indeed, Ai is gonna kill us all. Before I got out of bed, this song came to mind. It’s still very riugh:

There’s a world of Ai coming
And you’re not gonna like the scene.
No more work for all you humans
Cuz Ai will move your cheese.

All your years of higher learning
All your dreams of getting rich
Will be gone in just a second
Mark my words you’ll be replaced with ease.

Oh danger! Oh anger!
It’s getting stranger!
Where to run? Where to hide?
Where’s the fun when you’ve lost your pride?

Chorus:
Ai, Ai no!
Old McDonalds back to the farms we go!
Ai, Ai Oh!
Join the Amish
Or die in famish
What a way to go!

First, the meter was off throughout.

Second, in the first verse, the last word in the last line should rhyme with “go,” and the meter is way off.

“And lemonade pitchers standing in a row” would work.

It’s beginning to feel a lot like summer,
Everywhere you go;
From the sunny beaches to
The cloudless skies so blue
And lemonade pitchers that seem to appear on cue.

Anyway, it was a fun exercise. When my grandson introduced me to AI, I was flabbergasted. Watch out, Raoul, you could be replaced.